Your style and coloring look like they were taken right off of a children's book, I love it! I do think it may look a teensy bit weird that Lily and James are bodiless, perhaps it would look complete if you added that, but even so, it looks gorgeous, great job! Also I agree with below, the detail of Harry smiling in the mirror is exquisit.
I love HP and the drawings is really wonderful......u learning really good U got a nice talent
The FEELS! It was a nice touch to have the Harry in the mirror grinning impishly.
awww, i so remember that scene T_T
It is so sad
I absolutely love the style this was drawn in